This week for writing we had to write about a picture of a boat at sea I wrote about a girl on a island.
Press here ---> The story
This week for writing we had to write about a picture of a boat at sea I wrote about a girl on a island.
Press here ---> The story
Hi Priscilla, nice have you finished your writing? You could put your writing here and show us how much you've done so far. I'd love to see. You have a good start.
ReplyDeleteHi Charmy after reading your comment I made the link bigger than the normal words so you can see it you can just press on the link and it will come up.
DeleteKia ora Priscilla,
ReplyDeleteWow! What a fantastic piece of writing.I love how you tried to use vocabulary to allude to your message. My tip is to create a word cloud. For example if the emotion you want to evoke is a sense of relief, brainstorm different words that give a sense of relief and use in your writing. You have started to use it.
I also like how you have started to link your paragraphs together so that it flows and different sentence structures.
Have you got tips for other writers?
Looking forward to your future blog post,
Miss Laxa
Hi Ms Laxa thank you for commenting on my blog.
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