Tuesday, August 24, 2021

My changed Goldilocks story

 A few days ago everyone in my class had to rewrite the Goldilocks story or make it into a play with a different ending so here is my changed Goldilocks story called brunette locks.  sorry about the size 

2 comments:


  1. Well done! I love your imagination, it is going to take a bit of work to make it into a play, but good luck, I know you will do a great job! I would love to see it when finished.

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  2. Hi Priscilla,
    That was so good. Next time you could try adding a bit more humour. I like how you described everything so well.

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